Take My Hand - Work in Progress

To be a bit different, I thought I would post up a track that I am currently working on (not one that is already finished and released). It's a fairly uplifting progressive track and at this stage, it is just an instrumental.

I've written most of the lyrics for it and once I throw this cold, I'll be doing some vocal recording.

So in the meantime, I'd love some feedback. Does any part of the mix sound out of place? Do you think I should add more parts? Do you reckon I should simply cut a section out? Throw any feedback my way; positive or negative. I can take it!

A snapshot of the lyrics

Take my hand but don't take it too seriously,

Understand I've got what you need.

Don't pretend you've been here previously

De Ja Vu, I know what you mean.

It's about two strangers that meet at a festival and spend the day together. They've only just met but they've never been so close...